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Thursday, 10 March 2016

Dark places.

Dark places. By Desna Wallace.
It’s dark and wet,with slimy,slithery creatures,in the deepest,darkest corner of the ocean. It’s dark and wet,with spooky shadowy shapes in the deepest darkest corner of the forest,It’s dark and wet,with soggy,smelly sandwiches,in the deepest darkest corner of my brothers school bag.


         Questions
  1. What groups of words are repeated in every verse?
      It’s dark and wet,with,the,of,in,deepest darkest corner.
   2.Which words have the same beginning sounds in verse 1?
      slimy,slithery. deepest,darkest.
    3.In what ways is the bottom of a school bag like a corner of a       school bag like a corner of a forest or ocean?
       A dark place where things collection in a pile.
4- Slimy, slithery creatures.
   eel,salamander,electric eels,sea fish,jelly fish,blob fish.
    spooky,shadowy shapes
   dark tall trees. monster. ghosts.
5- What do you think makes this poem dry (bad)
 Because they use the same words over and over.
 I also think that it is not funny because it was make in the old days.
 I think that they should read it little kids and not kids older than 9 and older.


  
 
                   

    

Describing a Witch.




We are learning to describe a character.

I will be successful when I have..
  • used adjectives to show what my character looks like.
She looked really lovely and like a dreamboat.
Her hair is straight and brown.
She had a button like nose as small as a mouse .
Her voice was soothing, nice and lovely.
She had shaped eyebrows that were straight and smooth.  
Her face is cute and pretty.
Her stick was brown and carried her pitch black cat

I shared my work with: Sita,Mya and Angel.

Thursday, 3 March 2016

My 30 word trip to Tiritiri Matangi.

One hot  Wednesday our year 5,6 and 7 studies went to Tiritiri Matangi. We had got there by Bus and Ferry.When we first arrived there we met our volunteers.





 

My friend and I.





Hi my name is Vedel . This photo was taken with one of my best friends. My mother loves to cook. She makes some amazing food. I hope that you enjoyed my photo and writing.