Dark places.

Dark places. By Desna Wallace.

It’s dark and wet,with slimy,slithery creatures,in the deepest,darkest corner of the ocean. It’s dark and wet,with spooky shadowy shapes in the deepest darkest corner of the forest,It’s dark and wet,with soggy,smelly sandwiches,in the deepest darkest corner of my brothers school bag.

         Questions

1. What groups of words are repeated in every verse?

      It’s dark and wet,with,the,of,in,deepest darkest corner.

   2.Which words have the same beginning sounds in verse 1?

      slimy,slithery. deepest,darkest.

    3.In what ways is the bottom of a school bag like a corner of a       school bag like a corner of a forest or ocean?

       A dark place where things collection in a pile.

4- Slimy, slithery creatures.

   eel,salamander,electric eels,sea fish,jelly fish,blob fish.

    spooky,shadowy shapes

   dark tall trees. monster. ghosts.

5- What do you think makes this poem dry (bad)

 Because they use the same words over and over.

 I also think that it is not funny because it was make in the old days.

 I think that they should read it little kids and not kids older than 9 and older.